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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reportıng the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph gives information about the proportion of tourists who visit Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017 particularly. Overall, visitors staying on cruise ships experienced an upward trend while visitors staying on island fluctuated over the time. There is a gradual increase regarding visitors on total. In 2010, Visitors staying on cruise ships was merely 1 million while plain decrese over time was 2. 7 million in 2016. At the end of the period 3. 5 millions of visitors staying on cruise ships increased dramatically and reached a peak. Visitors staying on island was approximately 0. 7 and 1. 3 million in 2011 and in 2016 relatively. It stayed stable between 2013 and 2015 while at the end of the period it reached 1. 5 million. The number of total visitors were merely 0. 3 in 2012 when it started to increase gradually and reached 2 million over time. The proportion of total visitors were higher than the people who visit on island.
The graph gives information about the proportion of tourists who visit Caribbean
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island
from 2010 to 2017
particularly
.

Overall
,
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visitors
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staying
on cruise ships experienced an upward trend while
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visitors
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staying
on
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island
fluctuated over the time. There is a gradual increase regarding
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visitors
on total.

In 2010,
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Visitors
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staying
on cruise ships was
merely
1
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million
while plain
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decrese
over time was 2. 7
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million
in 2016. At the
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end
of the period 3. 5
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millions
of
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visitors
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staying
on cruise ships increased
dramatically
and reached a peak.

Visitors
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staying
on
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island
was approximately 0. 7 and 1. 3
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million
in 2011 and in 2016
relatively
. It stayed stable between 2013 and 2015 while at the
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end
of the period it reached 1. 5
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million
. The number of total
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visitors
were
merely
0. 3 in 2012 when it
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started
to increase
gradually
and reached 2
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million
over time. The proportion of total
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visitors
were higher than the
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people
who visit on
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island
.

IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

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