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THE TABLE BELOW SHOWS INFORMATION AND PREDICTIONS REGARDING THE CHANGE IN PERCENTAGE OF THE POPULATION AGED 65 AND ABOVE IN THREE COUNTRIES

THE TABLE GIVES INFORMATION ABOUT THE PROPORTION OF OLD PEOPLE AS PERCENTAGWISE IN THE COUNTRIES LIKE CANADA, GERMANY, UK IN THE YEARS 1988, 2000 AND 2030. OVERALL, THE HEIGHTEST RATE SHOWN IN THE GERMANY WHILE, THE LOWEST POPULATION IN UK. ON ONE HAND, IN 1988 AMONG 3 COUNTRIES, THE GERMANY WAS HUGE IN NUMBER APPROXIMATELY A FIFTH (20. 45) WHEREAS, THE UK IS LEAST(14. 23) WHEN COMPARED TO CANADA WHICH WAS 16. 32. BUT, IN 2000 IT WAS SAME IN THE CATEGORIES OF HIGHEST AND LOWEST PARTICULARLY THERE IS A CHANGE IN THE VALUE GERMANY WAS 20. 67 THEN CANADA 25. 32 WHILE UK AGAIN IS 14. 89. ON OTHER HAND, THE PREDICTION IN 2030 WHICH SHOW SIGNIFICIANT RISE IN THE VALUE MAINLY UK IS 20. 35 AND A BIT GREATER IS CANNADA(26. 35) AND HERE THE HIGHER IS GERMANY
THE TABLE GIVES INFORMATION ABOUT THE PROPORTION OF
OLD
PEOPLE
AS
PERCENTAGWISE
IN THE COUNTRIES LIKE CANADA, GERMANY, UK IN THE YEARS 1988, 2000 AND 2030.

OVERALL
, THE
HEIGHTEST
RATE SHOWN IN THE GERMANY WHILE, THE LOWEST POPULATION IN UK.

ON ONE HAND, IN 1988 AMONG 3 COUNTRIES, THE GERMANY WAS
HUGE IN NUMBER
APPROXIMATELY A FIFTH (20. 45) WHEREAS, THE UK IS LEAST(14. 23) WHEN COMPARED TO CANADA WHICH WAS 16. 32.
BUT
, IN 2000 IT WAS SAME IN THE CATEGORIES OF HIGHEST AND LOWEST
PARTICULARLY
THERE IS A
CHANGE
IN THE VALUE GERMANY WAS 20. 67 THEN CANADA 25. 32 WHILE UK AGAIN IS 14. 89.

ON OTHER HAND, THE PREDICTION IN 2030 WHICH
SHOW
SIGNIFICIANT
RISE IN THE VALUE
MAINLY
UK IS 20. 35 AND A BIT GREATER IS
CANNADA
(26. 35) AND HERE THE HIGHER IS GERMANY
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IELTS academic THE TABLE BELOW SHOWS INFORMATION AND PREDICTIONS REGARDING THE CHANGE IN PERCENTAGE OF THE POPULATION AGED 65 AND ABOVE IN THREE COUNTRIES

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