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The diagram below show how leather goods are produced.

The illustration depicts the way leather items are manufactured. Overall, it is a man-made process, which has seven steps, beginning with drying animal skin and ending with manufacturing final leather products. Despite being mostly done by machinery, it is a lengthy process. The first stage of the process is drying. Animal skin is dried in the air. Then, it is sent to a factory. The second step is washing. In this stage, dried animal skin is washed in water and lime solution. After that the next stage is soaking, in this step, washed skin is soaked in lime. In the next step, soaked skin is flattened in the machine. Therafter, skin is soaked in tannin. It is made of water and vegetable matter. Next, polishing is done with the help of machine. Finally, this polished leather is transferred to the factory, where different items such as shoes, bags, heels and balls are produced.
The illustration depicts the way leather items
are manufactured
.

Overall
, it is a
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man
-made process, which has seven
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steps
, beginning with drying animal
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skin
and ending with manufacturing final leather products. Despite being
mostly
done by machinery, it is a lengthy process.

The
first
stage of the process is drying. Animal
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skin
is dried
in the air. Then, it is
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sent
to a factory. The second
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step
is washing. In this stage, dried animal
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skin
is washed
in water and lime solution. After that the
next
stage is soaking, in this
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step
, washed
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skin
is soaked
in lime.

In the
next
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step
, soaked
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skin
is flattened
in the machine.
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Therafter
,
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skin
is soaked
in tannin. It
is made
of water and vegetable matter.
Next
, polishing
is done
with the
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help
of machine.
Finally
, this polished leather
is transferred
to the factory, where
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different
items such as shoes, bags, heels and balls
are produced
.
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