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The two diagrams illustrate the quantity of CO2 discharged and levels of transportation in England and Wales during the period from 2000 to 2020.

The two diagrams illustrate the quantity of CO2 discharged and levels of transportation in England and Wales during the period from 2000 to 2020. Gr0pQ
The two diagrams illustrate the quantity of co2 discharged by many types of transport and the number of vehicles expected between England and Wales during the initial 20-year from 2000 to 2020. Overall, cars and trucks are on the top and sharply increasing, whereas the remaining transportation methods are not seen to rise. There is a significant rising in the number of vehicles in the two countries in the same period. In the bar chart, in 2000, the most discharged cars were at 20 million tons Co2, followed by trucks with 15 million tons co2. On the other hand, the figure for vans produced nearly 12 million co2, which was smaller than that of trucks is that 3 million co2. In the final, the bus emissions were the smallest, at under 10 million tons co2. Hence, what happens had appeared in 2000 that will have been growing by 2020. The line chart shows that the number of vehicles is expanding enormously, at 20 million, nearly 35 million, and over 50 million in 2000, 2010 and 2020, respectively. Moreover, the figure in 2020 is over double that in 2000.
The two diagrams illustrate the quantity of co2 discharged by
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types of transport and the number of vehicles
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between England and Wales during the initial 20-year from 2000 to 2020.

Overall
, cars and trucks are on the top and
sharply
increasing, whereas the remaining transportation methods are not
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to rise. There is a significant rising in the number of vehicles in the two countries in the same period.

In the bar chart, in 2000, the most discharged cars were at 20
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million
tons Co2, followed by trucks with 15
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tons co2.
On the other hand
, the figure for vans produced
nearly
12
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million
co2, which was smaller than that of trucks is that 3
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million
co2. In the final, the bus emissions were the smallest, at under 10
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million
tons co2.
Hence
, what happens had appeared in 2000 that will have been growing by 2020.

The line chart
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that the number of vehicles is expanding
enormously
, at 20
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,
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35
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, and over 50
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in 2000, 2010 and 2020,
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Moreover
, the figure in 2020 is over double that in 2000.
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IELTS academic The two diagrams illustrate the quantity of CO2 discharged and levels of transportation in England and Wales during the period from 2000 to 2020.

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