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2014 data about food consumption

2014 data about food consumption 1VYdG

The pie chart displays the data about world food consumption in year 2014. Overall, it is clear that meat was consumed at higher rates in year 2014. While rice were least preferred by masses. It is apparently seen that larger slice of pie chart was occupied by meat with 31. 4%. On the contrary hand fish was eaten by individuals slightly 4% less than it. 11. 7% serials were purchased by customers. In year 2014 breads percentage was 5. 5 %. Moving to other parts of pie chart, Vegetables and fruits were utilised by people at similar rates. Last rice was buy by 2. 5 percent.

The pie chart displays the data about world food consumption in year 2014.

Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that meat was consumed
 at higher rates in year 2014. “While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
 rice were least preferred by masses.

It is apparently
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that larger slice of pie chart was occupied
 by meat with 31. 4%. On the contrary
 hand fish was eaten
 by individuals slightly
 4% less than it. 11. 7% serials were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 by customers. In year 2014 breads percentage was 5. 5 %.

Moving to other parts of pie chart, Vegetables and fruits were Possible spelling mistake. 'utilised' is British English.utilized
utilised
 by This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 at similar rates. Last rice was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 by 2. 5 percent. 