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The diagram illustrates different stages in the process of manufacturing bricks from the digging step to delivery.

The diagram illustrates different stages in the process of manufacturing bricks from the digging step to delivery. PMpGg
A glanse at the diagram provided the information about the process of making bricks and delived Overall, what stands out from the process is that there are seven procedures in the production of bricks manufacturing, starting with the preparation of clay and ending with the delivering of bricks to customers. In the first stage of the producing, clay is dug from the ground. Then, The clay is placed onto a metal grid and processed in a roller which is filled with sand and water. Subsequently, the mixture is either put in a mould or used a wire cutter to make shaped bricks. At the fourth stage in the process, the bricks are put in a drying oven for one or two days. The dried bricks are heated in a kiln with a moderate temperature (200 to 980 degrees), and high temperature up to 1300 degrees, before spending two to three days in a cooling chamber. . Finally, the finished bricks are packaged and delivered on a lorry for delivery.
A
glanse
at the diagram provided the information about the process of making
bricks
and
delived


Overall
, what stands out from the process is that there are seven procedures in the production of
bricks
manufacturing, starting with the preparation of clay and ending with the delivering of
bricks
to customers.

In the
first
stage of the producing, clay
is dug
from the ground. Then, The clay
is placed
onto a metal grid and processed in a roller which
is filled
with sand and water.
Subsequently
, the mixture is either put in a
mould
or
used
a wire cutter to
make
shaped bricks.

At the fourth stage in the process, the
bricks
are put
in a drying oven for one or two days. The dried
bricks
are heated
in a kiln with a moderate temperature (200 to 980 degrees), and high temperature up to 1300 degrees,
before
spending two to three days in a cooling chamber.
.
Finally
, the finished
bricks
are packaged
and delivered on a lorry for delivery.
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