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The two diagrams illustrate the current site of an aiport and how it will look like after redevelopment next year.

The two diagrams illustrate the current site of an aiport and how it will look like after redevelopment next year. YRW7d
The two diagrams illustrate the current site of an aiport and how it will look like after redevelopment next year. A lot of new facilites are introduced in the later version while the overall structure stays similar except the expansion in the north side. In the current site of the airport, there are two rooms, one for departures in the left and one for arrivals in the right. Both of the rooms have security and passport control section right opposite of the entrances. There are 8 spots for aeroplanes where passenger can reach through walkway. In the after development version of the site, the number of entrances are doubled for each room(2 for each room) while the location of the rooms are unchanged. The spots for aeroplanes are increased to 20 where passengers will be able to commute through sky train. In addition to that, the departure room is reorganized with the new bag drop facility and the cafe in the left side of the room while the check in location is relocated to the right. In the arrivals room, there will be a number of new facilities like ATM, car hire and a cafe, all are seen in the left side of the room.
The two diagrams illustrate the
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facilites
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overall
structure stays similar except the expansion in the north side.

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site of the airport, there are two
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rooms
, one for departures in the
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left
and one for arrivals in the right. Both of the
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rooms
have security and passport control section right opposite of the entrances. There are 8 spots for
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aeroplanes
where passenger can reach through walkway.

In the after development version of the site, the number of entrances
are doubled
for each
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room(2
for each
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while the location of the
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rooms
are unchanged
. The spots for
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aeroplanes
are increased
to 20 where passengers will be able to commute through sky train.
In addition
to that, the departure
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room
is reorganized
with the new bag drop facility and the
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cafe
in the
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left
side of the
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room
while the
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in location
is relocated
to the right. In the arrivals
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room
, there will be a number of new facilities like ATM, car hire and a
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cafe
, all are
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IELTS academic The two diagrams illustrate the current site of an aiport and how it will look like after redevelopment next year.

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