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The bar chart give information about around the world purchases of four various kinds of digital games over the next 6 years.

The bar chart give information about around the world purchases of four various kinds of digital games over the next 6 years. mXwG8
The bar chart give information about around the world purchases of four various kinds of digital games over the next 6 years. Overall, It is clear that Handheld Games, Online Games and Mobile Phone Games gradually increase by 2006 while Console Games steadly decreased. According to bar chart, beginning of the period Consola Games and Handheld Games with almost 6 bn to aproximately 10 bn, respectively. Followed by; in 2001, Online Games with roughly 2 bn, Console Games aproximately 9 bn, Handheld Games with around 3 bn. When comes to in 2003, Mobile Phone Games exceeded Online Games. Mobile Phone Games and Online Games re-balanced in 2004. After a year, Mobile Phone Games exceeded to Online Games and keep going. In conclusion, It can be seen all the games type over the six years significantly rise
The bar chart give information about around the world
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purchases
of four various kinds of digital

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games
over the
next
6 years.

Overall
, It is
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clear
that Handheld
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Games
,
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Online
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Games
and Mobile
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Phone
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Games
gradually
increase

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by
2006 while Console
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Games
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steadly
decreased.

According to bar chart, beginning of the period
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Consola
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Games
and Handheld
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Games
with almost 6

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bn
to
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aproximately
10
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,
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. Followed by; in 2001,
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Online
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Games
with roughly 2
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bn
,

Console
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aproximately
9
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, Handheld
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with around 3
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bn
. When
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comes
to in 2003,

Mobile
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Phone
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Games
exceeded
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Online
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Games
. Mobile
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Phone
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and
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Online
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Games
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re-balanced


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in
2004. After a year, Mobile
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Phone
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exceeded to
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Online
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and
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keep
going.

In conclusion
, It can be
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seen
all the
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games
type over the six years
significantly
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IELTS academic The bar chart give information about around the world purchases of four various kinds of digital games over the next 6 years.

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