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The line graph provides information about radio and television audiences in Britain between October and December in the year 1992.

The line graph provides information about radio and television audiences in Britain between October and December in the year 1992. B7kG5

The line graph provides information about radio and television audiences in Britain between October and December in the year 1992. Overall, It can be seen radio and television percentages of UK population including over 4-years old. TV and radio audiences of fluctuate during the day. In the end of day, It means time of night most spend hours to TV while, lowest to radio. According to line graph, from 1. 00 and 6. 00 am radio and TV audiences slightly increased. At the time 8. 00 am radio listener to reached a peak rate with 25%. After that, rapidly decreased to 10% at the 15. 00 pm. On the other hand TV watcher percentage reached with 15% and outreced rate of radio listener at the 13. 00 pm. TV watcher to reached peak time of 20. 00 with 45%. After between 20. 00 pm and 23. 00 both TV and radio audiences gradually decreased to 15% and 5%, respectively. In conclusion, It is clear that time of mid-day, It means 8. 00 am and 20. 00 pm more than rates of audiences beginning day and the end of the day.

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 in Britain between October and December in the year 1992.

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 of night most spend hours to TV while, lowest to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransmissionwireless
radio
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radio
 and TV You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgatheringcrowdgallerycongregationpublicmarket
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15. 00 pm. On the other hand
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 of 20. 00 with 45%. After between 20. 00 pm and 23. 00 both TV and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransmissionwireless
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.

In conclusion
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time
 of mid-day, It means 8. 00 am and 20. 00 pm more than rates of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgatheringcrowdgallerycongregationpublicmarket
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