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Line graph and table chart

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The given are line graph and table that are illustrates the annual amount of medium weather with sunshine hours in three english major citiesOverall, although New york and Sydney's weather temprature face a significant increase and rise to higher degree than Londons in the middle of year, on december the tripple countries come back to their begun level as in January. And in table, the both New york and sydney make up longer hours rather than in london differing than in line graphLooking clearly from the details, temprature in london is considerable higher than other 2 countries, that is approximately over than 25°. However London and New york are considered the cold cities with tempratue of just under the 10 and 5 accordingly. Despite of begunning results The both colder countries' calling New york and Sydney average gradus grow gradually up to around 30°from december to July while the hottest country experiences a slight decrease that decrease to 10° Though after july all countries stop their position and star to opposite action to last event and New york and Sydney start the cooling with a significant decline. that a fall to around 10 and 5 respectively as in december whereas London keep the dominance of temprature with approximately 25 gradus at the end of the period despite of a fall. However the table is completly various than line graph becouse there is New york makes up the longest hour that is 2. 535 hours and sydney in a second level with difference of approximately 50 hours. But in london, the hours of sunshine is a significant diffirent that is just 1. 180 hours in a year
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are line graph and table that are illustrates the annual amount of medium weather with sunshine
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hours
in three
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english
major
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citiesOverall
, although
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New york
and Sydney's weather
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temprature
face a significant increase and rise to higher degree than
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Londons
in the middle of year, on
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december
the
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tripple
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countries
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come
back to their begun level as in January. And in table, the both
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New york
and
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sydney
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make
up longer
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rather
than in
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london
differing than in line
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graphLooking
clearly
from the
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,
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temprature
in
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london
is considerable higher than other 2
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,
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approximately over than 25°.
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London and
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New york
are considered
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cold
cities with
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tempratue
of
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under the 10 and 5
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.
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begunning
results The both colder countries' calling
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New york
and Sydney average
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gradus
grow
gradually
up to around 30°from
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december
to July while the hottest
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experiences a slight decrease that decrease to 10° Though after
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july
all
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their position and star to opposite action to last
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and
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New york
and Sydney
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the cooling with a significant decline.
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respectively
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whereas London
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the dominance of
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temprature
with approximately 25
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end
of the period
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despite of
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the table is
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completly
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various
than line graph
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there is
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New york
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makes
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2. 535
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in a second level with difference of approximately 50
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.
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in
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london
, the
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of sunshine is a significant
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diffirent
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just
1. 180
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hours
in a year

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