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Line graph and table chart

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The given are line graph and table that are illustrates the annual amount of medium weather with sunshine hours in three english major citiesOverall, although New york and Sydney's weather temprature face a significant increase and rise to higher degree than Londons in the middle of year, on december the tripple countries come back to their begun level as in January. And in table, the both New york and sydney make up longer hours rather than in london differing than in line graphLooking clearly from the details, temprature in london is considerable higher than other 2 countries, that is approximately over than 25°. However London and New york are considered the cold cities with tempratue of just under the 10 and 5 accordingly. Despite of begunning results The both colder countries' calling New york and Sydney average gradus grow gradually up to around 30°from december to July while the hottest country experiences a slight decrease that decrease to 10° Though after july all countries stop their position and star to opposite action to last event and New york and Sydney start the cooling with a significant decline. that a fall to around 10 and 5 respectively as in december whereas London keep the dominance of temprature with approximately 25 gradus at the end of the period despite of a fall. However the table is completly various than line graph becouse there is New york makes up the longest hour that is 2. 535 hours and sydney in a second level with difference of approximately 50 hours. But in london, the hours of sunshine is a significant diffirent that is just 1. 180 hours in a year
The
given
are line graph and table that are illustrates the annual amount of medium weather with sunshine
hours
in three
english
major
citiesOverall
, although
New york
and Sydney's weather
temprature
face a significant increase and rise to higher degree than
Londons
in the middle of year, on
december
the
tripple
countries
come
back to their begun level as in January. And in table, the both
New york
and
sydney
make
up longer
hours
rather
than in
london
differing than in line
graphLooking
clearly
from the
details
,
temprature
in
london
is considerable higher than other 2
countries
,
that is
approximately over than 25°.
However
London and
New york
are considered
the
cold
cities with
tempratue
of
just
under the 10 and 5
accordingly
.
Despite of
begunning
results The both colder countries' calling
New york
and Sydney average
gradus
grow
gradually
up to around 30°from
december
to July while the hottest
country
experiences a slight decrease that decrease to 10° Though after
july
all
countries
stop
their position and star to opposite action to last
event
and
New york
and Sydney
start
the cooling with a significant decline.
that
a fall to around 10 and 5
respectively
as in
december
whereas London
keep
the dominance of
temprature
with approximately 25
gradus
at the
end
of the period
despite of
a fall.
However
the table is
completly
various
than line graph
becouse
there is
New york
makes
up the longest
hour
that is
2. 535
hours
and
sydney
in a second level with difference of approximately 50
hours
.
But
in
london
, the
hours
of sunshine is a significant
diffirent
that is
just
1. 180
hours
in a year
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