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The two diagrams illustrate a number of changes in Sholeaton between two different years, 1965 and 2015.

The two diagrams illustrate a number of changes in Sholeaton between two different years, 1965 and 2015. 8L205
The two maps illustrate the number of changes in Sholeaton between two different years 1995 and 2015 Overall, it is clearly evident that the Sholeaton town witnessed numerous transformations throughout the period. The most striking alteration concentrated in the middle part of the town with the extension of the shopping center. Besides that, other facilities in the rest of this part also developed significantly As can be seen in the maps, in 1965, there was a small park next to a big swimming pool on the northside of Sholeaton. However, in 2015, the park was expanded leading to the demolition of the swimming pool. Beside, there was once the library building, once located on the south of this town. Towards the southwest, in 1965, this town built the fountain as a replacement for the former old cafe, which was surrounded by a number of shops. In addition, a restaurant with a series of trees was also planted to replace some old shops to provide fresh air for Sholeaton citizens. By 2015 the central area changed considerably, mostly regarding the bigger of the shopping center result in the movement of the bus station to the Southwest of the town. In the eastern part of Sholeaton, the number of houses dramatically increased, and tripled particularly. In fact, people had more opportunities to walk and cycle in this town thanks to the erection of pedestrian crossing and a cycle lane on the road adjacent to these houses. Moreover, in the southern part of the town, a newly built bicycle park was added near the aged car park, which still remained intact. Finally, the former library to the southeast was torn down to make way for a new business center.
The two maps illustrate the number of
changes
in
Sholeaton
between two
different
years 1995 and 2015

Overall
, it is
clearly
evident that the
Sholeaton
town
witnessed numerous transformations throughout the period. The most striking alteration concentrated in the middle
part
of the
town
with the extension of the shopping center.
Besides
that, other facilities in the rest of this
part
also
developed
significantly


As can be
seen
in the maps, in 1965, there was a
small
park
next
to a
big
swimming pool on the
northside
of
Sholeaton
.
However
, in 2015, the
park
was expanded
leading to the demolition of the swimming pool. Beside, there was once the library building, once located on the south of this
town
. Towards the southwest, in 1965, this
town
built the fountain as a replacement for the former
old
cafe
, which
was surrounded
by a number of shops.
In addition
, a restaurant with a series of trees was
also
planted to replace
some
old
shops to provide fresh air for
Sholeaton
citizens.

By 2015 the central area
changed
considerably
,
mostly
regarding the
bigger
of the shopping center result in the movement of the bus station to the Southwest of the
town
. In the eastern
part
of
Sholeaton
, the number of
houses
dramatically
increased, and tripled
particularly
. In fact,
people
had more opportunities to walk and cycle in this
town
thanks to the erection of pedestrian crossing and a cycle lane on the road adjacent to these
houses
.
Moreover
, in the southern
part
of the
town
, a
newly
built bicycle
park
was
added
near the aged car
park
, which
still
remained intact.
Finally
, the former library to the southeast
was torn
down to
make
way for a new business center.
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IELTS academic The two diagrams illustrate a number of changes in Sholeaton between two different years, 1965 and 2015.

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