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the line graph below gives information about the car on a ship according to the household in great Britain summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

the line graph below gives information about the car on a ship according to the household in great Britain GJ28g

The line graph represent the information about the car on by great Britain household over a period of five decades between 1961 and 2001. Overall, it can be manifested that there was a significant increase in car ownership with two or more card whereas the number of citizens who had a no card declined drastically in the throughout the given years. considering at the comparison of graph in the year 1961, 70% people had no car and throughout the period of given time it was decreased continuously. As opposed to the household with two or more cards recorded as the climate gradually with almost 50%. They were 10 % in 1961 reasoning by 20 % after one decade and then after Rose continuously until 2001. Secondly, in the trend of households with one car started at with 70 percentage in 1961 and declined throughout the year with 40% in 1971. Moreover, there was a plummeted continuously and only 10 percentage in 2001.

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car
 on by Capitalize specific, well-defined geographical regions: "Great Britain"Great Britain
great Britain
 household over a period of five decades between 1961 and 2001.

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car
 ownership with two or more Possible agreement error. The noun 'card' seems to be countable, so consider using: "cards".cards
card
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given
 years.

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considering
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people
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car
 and throughout the period of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 time it was decreased
continuously
. As opposed to the household with two or more cards recorded as the climate gradually
 with almost 50%. They were 10 % in 1961 reasoning by 20 % after one decade and then after Rose continuously
 until 2001.

Secondly
, in the trend of households with one You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 at with 70 percentage in 1961 and declined throughout the year with 40% in 1971. Moreover
, there was a plummeted continuously
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only
 10 percentage in 2001. 

IELTS academic the line graph below gives information about the car on a ship according to the household in great Britain

Academic

American English

4 paragraphs

162 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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