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the chart shows the number of hidden costs of the UK's annual food bill

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The given chart shows the percentage of hidden costs paying for foods year on year in the UK. Overall, it is obvious that total expenditure of government subsidies for environment is as much as the rate of agriculture and shopping transport. Next, the tiny figure that cannot be detected easily of the international transport. As can be seen clearly in the pie chart that the percentage of paying for domestic road transport is as double as shopping transport with 29, 2% and 14, 5% in respectively. Then, the other is cost of agriculture with 20, 1%. As mentioned above, the cost of percentage for government subsidy’s environment is 36, 2% which is almost equal to the couple other type of figures that is agriculture and shopping transport while the final fraction is international transport peaking a trivial fraction with over 0. 02%. In conclusion, the average of the expenditure on the chart illustrates pretty nearly in percentage except the international transport.
The
given
chart
shows
the
percentage
of hidden costs paying for foods
year on year
in the UK.

Overall
, it is obvious that total expenditure of
government
subsidies for environment is as much as the rate of agriculture and shopping
transport
.
Next
, the tiny figure that cannot
be detected
easily
of the international transport.

As can be
seen
clearly
in the pie chart that the
percentage
of paying for domestic road
transport
is as double as shopping
transport
with 29, 2% and 14, 5% in
respectively
. Then, the other
is cost
of agriculture with 20, 1%.

As mentioned above, the cost of
percentage
for
government
subsidy’s environment is 36, 2% which is almost equal to the couple other type of figures
that is
agriculture and shopping
transport
while the final fraction is international
transport
peaking a trivial fraction with over 0. 02%.

In conclusion
, the average of the expenditure on the chart illustrates pretty
nearly
in
percentage
except the international
transport
.
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IELTS academic the chart shows the number of hidden costs of the UK's annual food bill

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