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The picture shows the science park in the past and at current

The picture shows the science park in the past and at current BgBQ5

The diagram describes the altered science park from 2008. Overall, while in 2008, there were limited number of facilities. once renovated, few areas were removed and replaced by new buildings. According to diagram, in 2008, there were hardly less buildings. such as, on the north side of the park there were offices and below that was a reception. Where at present reception was removed in order to construct University hub. Additionally, by removing grasslands which was on the west they constructed research and development area. likewise, IT center has changed into innovation centre. And few areas were extended that is cyber security building was extended by removing grasslands whereas the size of the car park was reduced. new facilities like station was introduced on the south by giving path from station to car park. And one bus stop and then a cycle path was also made. lastly, business units area remind in same place

The diagram This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :characterizesportrays
describes
 the altered science You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 from 2008.

Overall
, while in 2008, there were limited
 number of facilities. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOnce
once
 renovated, few You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
were removed
 and replaced by new buildings.

According to diagram, in 2008, there were hardly Did you mean "fewer"? The noun buildings is countable.fewer
less
 buildings. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSuch
such
 as, on the north side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 there were offices and below that was a reception. “Where” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Where
 at present reception was removed
 in order to construct University hub. Additionally
, by removing grasslands which was on the west they constructed research and development You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterLikewise
likewise
, IT center has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 into innovation Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
. And few You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
were extended
that is
 cyber security building was extended
 by removing grasslands whereas the size of the car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterNew
new
 facilities like station was introduced
 on the south by giving path from station to car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. And one bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 and then a cycle path was also
 made. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterLastly
lastly
, business Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "units'" or "unit's"?units'unit's
units
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 remind in same place