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The two diagram shows changes in river.

The two diagram shows changes in river. 5AxYe
The diagram depicts the information about changes over time in the river a new development even take place. It can be clearly seen that three major difference manifest. Taking a closer look, meander re-named by oxbow lake. Whereas neck of river was transfigure as sand and silt were put over which result into new channel formation. Nearby surroundings not face any changes due to change over river appearance. To wrap up, slight changes over sand and silt was result into new channel. Without disturbance goes over near by.
The diagram depicts the information about
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time in the river a new development even take place.

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clearly
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seen
that three major difference manifest. Taking a closer look, meander re-named by oxbow lake. Whereas neck of river was
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transfigure
as sand and silt
were put
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over
which result into new channel formation. Nearby surroundings not face any
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changes
due to
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change
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over
river appearance.

To wrap up, slight
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changes
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over
sand and silt was result into new channel. Without disturbance goes
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IELTS academic The two diagram shows changes in river.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
88 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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