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The diagram shows about university's sports Center change in the past and future.

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The provided diagram illustrates the information about how a University's Sports Centre look now and it's future plan of up gradation. Overall it it is readily noticeable that more systematic approach is looked forward to, as compared to the present structure, with different type of facilities being added. Two extra changing rooms will be built in the future. To begin with, the university's main block is collected in huge outdoor courts. There is a 25 - metre indoor pool with a changing room to the West side apart from that a seating area to the east side. There is a gym to the North side as well as a reception in the south side which comes near to pool. In terms of the future design, the Eastern side of the outdoor court will be replaced by sports hall. one on the top of that the outdoor Court on the Western side is reconstructed into a big leisure Pool. The current one, along with the construction of two dance studios in the east wall of the centre. In addition, one more changing room will be built in the south wall along a cafe as well as sports shop also constructed.
The provided diagram illustrates the information about how a University's Sports
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Centre
look
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now
and it's future plan of up gradation.
Overall
It seems you either mean "if it", "it" or there is a comma missing: "it, it".
it it
is
readily
noticeable that more systematic approach
is looked
forward to, as compared to the present structure, with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
type of facilities being
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
added
. Two extra changing rooms will
be built
in the future. To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with, the university's main block
is collected
in huge outdoor courts. There is a 25
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
-
Possible spelling mistake. 'metre' is British English.
metre
indoor pool with a changing room to the West side apart from that a seating area to the east side. There is a gym to the North side
as well
as a reception in the south side which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
comes
near to pool. In terms of the future design, the Eastern side of the outdoor court will
be replaced
by sports hall.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
one
on the top of that the outdoor Court on the Western side
is reconstructed
into a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
leisure Pool. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
one, along with the construction of two dance studios in the east wall of the
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.
centre
.
In addition
, one more changing room will
be built
in the south wall along a
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
as well
as sports shop
also
constructed.
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