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The pie charts below show the sources for UK tax revenue for last year and the total UK government spending for last year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the sources for UK tax revenue for last year and the total UK government spending for last year. m2mNA
The first graph illustrates the percentage of tax revenue from the UK residents and the second graph describes the number that the governments allocated the national budget on various fields of its country for last year. Overall, the UK spent their tax which was made from mainly income tax and national insurance to depend on the different categories and pensions, health care, welfare, and education occupied the most significant rate among the others. Therefore, it is seen that the Uk concentrate on citizens's needs in their lives. First of all, this country had 28% of income tax which accounted for the largest percentage and then they obtained 21% and 17% of tax from the national insurance and value added tax respectively. In addition, other sectors such as corperation tax, fuel duty, business rates, council tax, and others occupied only under the averate which was 10%. Secondly, the UK government consumed in variety ranges. Among those, the budget for pensions was 20% that was distributed the most and 18% of allocation was health care. Similarly, tax that spent on welfare and education accounted for 17% and 14% each. Interestingly, distribution of transport and general government was only 3%.
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first
graph illustrates the percentage of
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revenue from the UK residents and the second graph
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describes
the number that the
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governments
allocated the national budget on various fields of its country for last year.

Overall
, the UK spent their
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tax
which
was made
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mainly
income
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tax
and national insurance to depend on the
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different
categories and pensions, health care, welfare, and education occupied the most significant rate among the others.
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seen
that the
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concentrate on
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citizens's
needs in their
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lives
.

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First of all
, this country had 28% of income
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tax
which accounted for the largest
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percentage and
then they obtained 21% and 17% of
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tax
from the national insurance and value
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added
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respectively
.
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, other sectors such as
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corperation
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tax
, fuel duty, business rates, council
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tax
,
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and others
occupied
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averate
which was 10%.

Secondly
, the UK
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government
consumed in variety ranges. Among those, the budget for pensions was 20% that
was distributed
the most and 18% of allocation was health care.
Similarly
,
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that spent on welfare and education accounted for 17% and 14% each.
Interestingly
, distribution of transport and general
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government
was
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only
3%.
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