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The two charts below illustrate the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities from 2000 - 2010.

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The two charts below illustrate the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities from 2000 - 2010. The first graph shows that overseas students enrolled to Australia. In 2010, there were approximately 80. 000 students. The number of international students were stable until 2005, the number increase very fast. In 2010, over 40. 000 students. The next graph is about local students. 600. 000 students in 2010 which include 200. 000 new students this actually illustrate that Australian universities more suitable for overseas students than local students. Overall, the trends still continue go up each year for international students
The two charts below illustrate the
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enrolments
of overseas
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students
and local
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students
in Australian universities
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from 2000 - 2010
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The
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graph
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that overseas
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students
enrolled to Australia. In 2010, there were approximately 80. 000
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students
. The number of international
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students
were stable until 2005, the number increase
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very
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. In 2010, over 40. 000 students.

The
next
graph is about local
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students
. 600. 000
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students
in 2010 which include 200. 000 new
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students
this actually illustrate that Australian universities more suitable for overseas
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students
than local students.

Overall
, the trends
still
continue go up each year for international
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students
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IELTS academic The two charts below illustrate the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities from 2000 - 2010.

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