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The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one.The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life

The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life PKeB
According to the graph, the Chorleywood was developing from the main road at first. It took around ten years to accomplish marvelous and vital four main roads for the village. The southern part of the village was developed gradually starting from 20th century. The significant development in 20th century was building the motorway. They transported eastern part of the village since 1970. Then the eastern village developed coherently with the motorway. In the late 20th century, there were some housing developed in the southern part. Last but not least, the railway station and railway are developed since 1909. The famous Chorleywood Park and golf course is located in the center of the village. Thus, the village formed like hash shaped. The roads are developed in well structure so that we can arrive every part of the village.
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Chorleywood
was developing from the main road at
first
. It took around ten years to accomplish marvelous and vital four main roads for the
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village
. The southern
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part
of the
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village
was
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developed
gradually
starting from 20th century.

The significant development in 20th century was building the motorway. They transported eastern
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part
of the
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village
since 1970. Then the eastern
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village
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developed
coherently
with the motorway.

In the late 20th century, there were
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some
housing
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developed
in the southern
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part
. Last
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but
not least, the railway station and railway are
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developed
since 1909. The
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famous
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Chorleywood
Park and golf course
is located
in the center of the
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village
.
Thus
, the
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village
formed like hash shaped. The roads are
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developed
in well structure
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so
that we can arrive every
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of the
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.

IELTS academic The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life

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137 words
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