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The table data shows the proportion of income adults and children spent on 4 common items in the United Kingdom in 2005.

The table data shows the proportion of income adults and children spent on 4 common items in the United Kingdom in 2005. NbEj
The table compares the percentage of earning is invested by adults and teenagers on food, electronic equipment, music, and videos in Britain in the year 2005. It is measured in percentages. Overall, it is clear that adults spent most of their amount on food while children spent on music. However, men and women utilized their salary on food whilst boys and girls were more interested in music. In terms of, adults and children, adults were the largest purchaser of food comprised of 28% whereas children were the greatest buyer of music consisted of 41%. Moreover, the figure for electronic equipment was much higher in children as compared to adults, accounted for 35% and 15%, respectively. Furthermore, only 11% and 15% were spent by children on food and videos, and only 4% and 2% were spent by adults on music and videos. Regarding, men and women, there was a partial difference in spending, between both genders on food, accounted for 39% by women and 30% by men followed by only 7% by women on electronic equipment while for men, it was 21%. Besides, there was much less spending on music and videos, contributed by 5% and 2% by men, and only 2% and 0. 5% by women. By contrast, boys and girls spent an almost equal amount on music with 36% and 38% respectively. While spending on electronic equipment was about double for boys than girls, with 28% and 11% sequentially, whereas for food and videos, the percentages were relatively similar, with 9% and 20% for men and 11% and 16% for women.
The table compares the percentage of earning
is invested
by
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adults
and
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teenagers
on
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food
,
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electronic
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equipment
,
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music
, and
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videos
in Britain in the year 2005. It
is measured
in percentages.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that
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adults
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spent
most of their amount on
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food
while
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children
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spent
on
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music
.
However
,
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men
and
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women
utilized their salary on
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food
whilst boys and girls were more interested in music.

In terms of,
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adults
and
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children
,
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adults
were the largest purchaser of
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food
comprised of 28% whereas
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children
were the greatest buyer of
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music
consisted of 41%.
Moreover
, the figure for
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electronic
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equipment
was much higher in
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children
as compared to
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adults
, accounted for 35% and 15%,
respectively
.
Furthermore
,
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only
11% and 15% were
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spent
by
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children
on
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food
and
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videos
, and
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only
4% and 2% were
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spent
by
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adults
on
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music
and videos.

Regarding,
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men
and
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women
, there was a partial difference in spending, between both genders on
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food
, accounted for 39% by
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women
and 30% by
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men
followed by
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only
7% by
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women
on
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electronic
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equipment
while for
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men
, it was 21%.
Besides
, there was much less spending on
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music
and
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videos
, contributed by 5% and 2% by
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men
, and
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only
2% and 0. 5% by women.

By contrast, boys and girls
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spent
an almost equal amount on
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music
with 36% and 38%
respectively
. While spending on
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electronic
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equipment
was about double for boys than girls, with 28% and 11%
sequentially
, whereas for
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food
and
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videos
, the percentages were
relatively
similar, with 9% and 20% for
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men
and 11% and 16% for
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women
.
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