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The two bar graphs bring out the information regarding the proportions of male and female in employment in three nations namely Canada, South korea and Sweden in the given years 2005 and 2015

The two bar graphs bring out the information regarding the proportions of male and female in employment in three nations namely Canada, South korea and Sweden in the given years 2005 and 2015 k6aoR

The two bar graphs bring out the information regarding the proportions of male and female in employment in three nations namely Canada, South korea and Sweden in the given years 2005 and 2015. Overall, it can be seen that there is the highest percentage of working men in all three countries in the both years as compared to women. Looking at the first chart, in 2005, male employment stood at 60% which was the highest in canada while the latest working rate shared was by women at only 30℅. Noticeably, there was a significant difference between male and female employment in South Korea. The former standing with 70℅. While around 20℅ in latter. This was followed by Sweden which was were approximately 71℅ of male and 51℅ female employment respectively. Over the decade, the figure showed upward trend. Men employed in Canada, South Korea and Sweden were significantly soared to 70℅, 80℅ and 62℅. Similarly, female accounted for working in all three countries rose rise to 50 ℅, 39℅ and 65℅ in contrast in to 2005.

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 years 2005 and 2015.

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 in all three countries in the both years as compared to women.

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 while the latest working rate shared was by women at This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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, there was a significant difference between male and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeminine
female
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employment
 in South Korea. The former standing with 70℅. While around 20℅ in latter. This was followed
 by Sweden which was Consider using a past participle here: "been".been
were
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 upward trend. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
Men
 employed in Canada, South Korea and Sweden were significantly
 soared to 70℅, 80℅ and 62℅. Similarly
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeminine
female
 accounted for working in all three countries rose rise to 50 ℅, 39℅ and 65℅ in contrast
 in to 2005. 