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The chart illustrates the population size, death rate, birth rate in England and Wales from 1700 to 2000?

The chart illustrates the population size, death rate, birth rate in England and Wales from 1700 to 2000? NmX52
Presented is the bar chart illustrating the information about the popular size in an area of UK and its mortality rate and fertility rate in 1700, 1800, 1900 and 2000. Overall, there was an upward trend in the population size from 1700 to 2000. It is remarkable that the birth rate was always higher than death rate during the same period. According to the bar chart, in the initial year, the number of population size in an area of UK was lowest, starting at 1. 6, after which it witnessed an appreciable increase to 3. 5. This figure kept rising significantly to 4. 5 in the last year. In terms of fertility rate and mortality rate, between 1700 and 1800, what is notable is that both mortality rate and fertility rate exhibited a trend of considerable rise, changing from 0. 41, 0. 35 to 0. 65, 0. 45 respectively. From 1800 onwards, birth rate declined sharply to 0. 41 in 1900 before experiencing a marked growth to nearly 0. 6 while death rate showed an upward trend, downing to approximately 0. 3 in the last year.
Presented is the bar chart illustrating the information about the popular size in an area of UK and its mortality
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rate
and fertility
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rate
in 1700, 1800, 1900 and 2000.

Overall
, there was an upward trend in the population size from 1700 to 2000. It is remarkable that the birth
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rate
was always higher than death
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rate
during the same period.

According to the bar chart, in the initial year, the number of population size in an area of UK was lowest, starting at 1. 6, after which it witnessed an appreciable increase to 3. 5. This figure
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kept
rising
significantly
to 4. 5 in the
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last year
.

In terms of fertility
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rate
and mortality
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rate
, between 1700 and 1800, what is notable is that both mortality
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rate
and fertility
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rate
exhibited a trend of considerable rise, changing from 0. 41, 0. 35 to 0. 65, 0. 45
respectively
. From 1800 onwards, birth
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rate
declined
sharply
to 0. 41 in 1900
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before
experiencing a marked growth to
nearly
0. 6 while death
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rate
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showed
an upward trend, downing to approximately 0. 3 in the
‘last year’ indicates a finished event of the past. Please check the predicate's tense.
last year
.
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IELTS academic The chart illustrates the population size, death rate, birth rate in England and Wales from 1700 to 2000?

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