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THE THREE PIE CHARTS SHOW THE AVERAGE COMSUMPTIOM OF SODIUM, SATURATED FAT AND ADDED SUGAR OF A AVERAGE USA CITIZEN.

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THE THREE PIE CHARTS SHOW THE AVERAGE COMSUMPTIOM OF SODIUM, SATURATED FAT AND ADDED SUGAR OF A AVERAGE USA CITIZEN. CONSUMPTIOM OF THESE NUTRIENTS MAY BE UNHEALTHY IF EATEN TOO MUCH, BUT MOST OF THE HOUSEHOLDS USE THESE NUTRIENTS ON A DAILY BASIS. SODIUM AND SATURATED FAT IS CONSUMED MORE IN BRUNCHES AND DINNER, ON THE OTHER HAND SUGAR IS USED MORE WHILE EATING SNACKS OVERALL, IT CAN REASONABLLY BE INFERED THAT A PLETHORA AMOUNT OF SALT IS USED DINNER COMAPARED TO AMOUNT USED IN BREAKFAST. ADDITONALLY, ALMOST HALF OF THE DAILY USE OF SUGAR IS USED IN SNACKS. ON THE OTHER HAND, ONE THIRD OF THE TOTAL INTAKE OF SATURATED FAT IS USED IN DINNER THE MOST SIGNIFICANT PERCENT IS, THE INTAKE OF SUGAR; SALT AND FATS HAVE STEADY USAGE IN BREAKFAST. WHILST, A WIDESPREAD CHANGE IS OBSERVED IN SNACKS. TAKING INTO CONSIDERATION THE LUNCH, MORE PEOPLE TEND TO CONSUME SODIUM COMPARED TO OTHER TWO NUTRIENTS
THE THREE PIE CHARTS
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SHOW
THE AVERAGE
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COMSUMPTIOM
OF SODIUM, SATURATED
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FAT
AND
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ADDED
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SUGAR
OF A

AVERAGE USA CITIZEN.

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CONSUMPTIOM
OF THESE NUTRIENTS MAY BE UNHEALTHY IF EATEN TOO MUCH,
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BUT
MOST OF THE HOUSEHOLDS
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USE
THESE

NUTRIENTS ON A DAILY BASIS. SODIUM AND SATURATED
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FAT
IS CONSUMED
MORE IN BRUNCHES AND DINNER, ON
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THE


OTHER HAND
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SUGAR
IS
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USED
MORE WHILE EATING SNACKS

OVERALL
, IT CAN
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REASONABLLY
BE
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INFERED
THAT A PLETHORA AMOUNT OF SALT IS
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USED
DINNER
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COMAPARED
TO

AMOUNT
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USED
IN BREAKFAST.
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ADDITONALLY
, ALMOST HALF OF THE DAILY
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USE
OF
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SUGAR
IS
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USED
IN SNACKS.

ON THE OTHER HAND
, ONE THIRD OF THE TOTAL INTAKE OF SATURATED
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FAT
IS
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USED
IN DINNER

THE MOST SIGNIFICANT PERCENT IS, THE INTAKE OF
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SUGAR
; SALT AND
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FATS
HAVE STEADY USAGE IN BREAKFAST.

WHILST, A WIDESPREAD
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CHANGE
IS OBSERVED
IN SNACKS. TAKING INTO CONSIDERATION THE LUNCH, MORE
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PEOPLE
TEND
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TO


CONSUME SODIUM COMPARED TO OTHER TWO NUTRIENTS
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IELTS academic THE THREE PIE CHARTS SHOW THE AVERAGE COMSUMPTIOM OF SODIUM, SATURATED FAT AND ADDED SUGAR OF A AVERAGE USA CITIZEN.

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