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The bar chart below illustrates the percentage of renewable energy in total energy supply in four countries from 1997 to 2010 .

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The bar chart below illustrates the percentage of renewable energy in total energy supply in four countries from 1997 to 2010. It is clear that Iceland has the highest the proportion of renewable energy in most of year. Turkey has a lower percentage than Iceland but also very high. Australia and Sweden have approximately equal proportion. In 1997, Iceland has the highest proportion of renewable energy, reached about 50%. On the other hand, the figure for consumption of renewable energy in Turkey was approxiamtely 40%. Australia and Sweden which have the quite same percentage, at about 9% and 5% respectively. From 2000 to 2010, Sweden and Iceland tend to increase sharply, reached about 10% and 70% respectively. In contrast, Australia tends to decrease dramatically, accounted for 9%. After with Australia, Turkey also drop remarkably, occupied over 30%.
The bar chart below illustrates the percentage of
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supply in four countries from 1997 to 2010. It is
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that Iceland has the highest the proportion of
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. Turkey has a lower percentage than Iceland
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high. Australia and Sweden have approximately equal proportion. In 1997, Iceland has the highest proportion of
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, reached about 50%.
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, the figure for consumption of
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in Turkey was
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40%. Australia and Sweden which have the quite same percentage, at about 9% and 5%
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From 2000 to 2010, Sweden and Iceland tend to increase
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, reached about 10% and 70%
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, Australia tends to decrease
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, accounted for 9%. After with Australia, Turkey
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IELTS academic The bar chart below illustrates the percentage of renewable energy in total energy supply in four countries from 1997 to 2010.

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