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the bar chart illustrates the average house expenses in england and its capital city

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The bar charts depict the cost to buy accommodation in England and its Capital citycountry - London in 1995 and 2013, and compare the average house expenses between many areas of England in 2013. It is clear that, there was an upward trend in the house expenses in England and London over an 18 year period. Moreover, the house prices in London dominated the real estate market in England whileand the cost to buy a house in the North East of England was the lowest in 2013. Looking into details, in 1995, the average price of a house in London was 200000 pounds, which was more expensive than the average cost to buy a house in England, 130000 pounds. In 2013, the house prices in London doubled up to over 400000 pounds per house, higher by two times than the country’s average. In the real estate market in 2013, the house prices in London were the highest, at 400000 pounds. By contrast, the fee to purchase a house in the North East side of England was the cheapest, at 100000 pounds per dwelling. The second and the third highest house costs were South East and South West respectively, ranging from 260000 to over 300000 pounds.
The bar charts depict the
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accommodation in England and its Capital
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London in 1995 and 2013, and compare the average
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expenses between
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areas of England in 2013.

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that, there was an upward trend in the
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expenses in England and London over an
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in London dominated the real estate market in England
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in the North East of England was the lowest in 2013.

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, in 1995, the average
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of a
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in London was
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200000 pounds
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in England,
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in London doubled up to over
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400000 pounds
per
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, higher by two times than the country’s average.

In the real estate market in 2013, the
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in London were the highest, at
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400000 pounds
. By contrast, the fee to
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in the North East side of England was the cheapest, at
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100000 pounds
per dwelling. The second and the third highest
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were South East and South West
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300000 pounds
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IELTS academic the bar chart illustrates the average house expenses in england and its capital city

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