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The three pie charts below the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981,1991, and 2001. Summarize the infromation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below illustrate the yearly expenses that took place in three consecutive years dated on 1981, 1991 and 2001 in UK school. As an overall the substantial majority of the expenditures are allotted to educators salaries while the least amount goes to Insurance. In 1981 the school expenses in the teachers salaries occupied almost half of the total which is 40%. While other workers salaries are only 1/4 or 28%. On the other hand the remaining 3/4 of the total which is 30% are divided to resources like books, and half goes to furniture and equipment. Comparing in year 1991 the educators salaries increased to 10% while others workers drop-down to 22% from 28% in 1981. Their is an increased of 5% to resources which goes up to 15% to 20%. Whereas the furniture and equipment a 10% was deducted to the expenditures from 1981. After a decade the educators receiving have been drop to 5% and the same thing happened to the other workers cutting off to 15%. In contrast resources decreased to 11% while the furniture increased in 18% from the previous decade. The insurance had the least significant amount allotted in all the expenses.

The diagrams below illustrate the yearly expenses that took place in three consecutive years dated on 1981, 1991 and 2001 in UK school. As an overall
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 is an increased of 5% to resources which goes up to 15% to 20%. Whereas the furniture and equipment a 10% was deducted
 to the expenditures from 1981.

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other
 workers cutting off to 15%. In Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?contrast,
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 resources decreased to 11% while the furniture increased in 18% from the previous decade. The insurance had the least significant amount allotted in all the expenses. 