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The given charts show what UK graduates and post graduates did after they left university in 2008. The number of students who opted for a full time job after finishing studies is not given. Overall, it can be seen that a large number of both graduates and post graduates went back to universities for further studies. A good proportion of students took up part time jobs.

The given chart indicates the information of UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full time-time work did after leaving collage in 2008. The number of students who opted for a full time job after finishing studies is not given. Overall, UK graduate and undergraduate students continue their study after leaving collage in 2008 and both of them had less interest in doing voluntary work. In 2008, the number of 2535 postgraduate students in UK did part-time work which is less than over 1500 graduate students who had a part-time job. Both graduate and undergraduate students in UK continued their study and the number of further study is the highest among the other types. Only 345 postgraduate students did voluntary work meanwhile 3500 graduate students did the same job which is 10 times more than postgraduate. The number of graduate students’ unemployment is 16235 more than postgraduate students which is 1625.
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IELTS academic The given charts show what UK graduates and post graduates did after they left university in 2008. The number of students who opted for a full time job after finishing studies is not given. Overall, it can be seen that a large number of both graduates and post graduates went back to universities for further studies. A good proportion of students took up part time jobs.

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