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The follow chart below shows the source of natural gas and the way it is distributed.

The process chart illustrates system production and distribution of natural gas. It is clear that 3 source of production are gathered in Regional storage then they are transported by several ways Natural gas is produced by Gas well, Oil well and imports. The first, gas delivered to gas plant from gas well. The next one is the production bring to refinery in order to refine from oil well. Then both of them are ready to transmit to Main underground storage. The third one is import which is directly goes to storage due to it is ready production. Final stage of producing is to transfer them to Regional storage via pipeline. Ready manufacture is transmitted by 40, 000 liter tankers and 24, 000 wagons to retail storage. At retail storage 120, 000 liters gas are stored and sell to induvidual customers in smaller 1, 200 liters by Delivery Truck.
The process chart illustrates system
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production
and distribution of natural
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gas
. It is
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clear
that 3 source of
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production
are gathered
in Regional
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storage
then they
are transported
by several ways Natural
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gas
is produced
by
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Gas
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well
, Oil
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well
and imports. The
first
,
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gas
delivered to
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gas
plant from
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gas
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well
. The
next
one is the
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production
bring to refinery in order to refine from oil
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well
. Then both of them are ready to transmit to Main underground
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storage
. The third one is import which is
directly
goes to
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storage
due to it is ready
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production
. Final stage of producing is to transfer them to Regional
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storage
via pipeline. Ready manufacture
is transmitted
by 40, 000 liter tankers and 24, 000 wagons to retail
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storage
. At retail
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storage
120, 000 liters
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gas
are stored
and sell to
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customers in smaller 1, 200 liters by Delivery Truck.

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