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The three pie charts below show the total school spending in the UK in three periods.

The three pie charts below show the total school spending in the UK in three periods. 6lOP8

The given pie graphs illustrate the sum of school expenditures in Great Britain in three different periods: 1981, 1991 and 2001. In general, the teacher’ salaries made up the biggest percentage while the insurance was the minority in three periods. In spite of the fluctuation of these fields through many years, the insurance and teachers’ salaries still kept this trend. It can be seen that the teachers’ salaries contributed the largest proportion in three years, which started at 40% in 1981, increased steadily to a half and ended at the point of 45% in 2001. Whereas, the insurance had a tiny rate in the graph, in 1981, it took the responsibility of 2% then rose to 3% and finished at 8% in 2001. The budget on other workers’ salaries, furniture & equipment and resources e. g. books witnessed an irregular tendency through 20 years. At first, they started at 28% and the same 5% respectively. However, in 2001, this proportion changed to 15%, 23% and 9% accordingly.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
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different
 periods: 1981, 1991 and 2001.

In general
, the teacher’ You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagefeepaystipendearningsincome
salaries
 made up the biggest percentage while the insurance was the minority in three periods. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:notwithstanding
In spite of
 the fluctuation of these fields through This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 years, the insurance and teachers’ You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagefeepaystipendearningsincome
salaries
still
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 this trend.

It can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that the teachers’ You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagefeepaystipendearningsincome
salaries
 contributed the largest proportion in three years, which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 at 40% in 1981, increased steadily
 to a half and ended at the point of 45% in 2001. Whereas, the insurance had a tiny rate in the graph, in 1981, it took the responsibility of 2% then rose to 3% and finished at 8% in 2001.

The budget on other workers’ You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagefeepaystipendearningsincome
salaries
, furniture & equipment and resources There should be no space here: "e.g.".e.g.
e. g.
 books witnessed an irregular tendency through 20 years. At first
, they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 at 28% and the same 5% respectively
. However
, in 2001, this proportion This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 to 15%, 23% and 9% accordingly
. 