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The diagram below shows the percentage of share total of world population of wheat by four different countries

The diagram below shows the percentage of share total of world population of wheat by four different countries 0MORQ
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of share of world population in six diffrent country canada, china, turkey, usa, and australiait is clear from the graph that usa share tha highest number of wheat which is 45% and the next is turkey who share the wheat around 32%. however canada and china share the a least number of wheat of population which are 13% and 10%respectively the usa also share the percentage of wheat wich is 8%. Overall, the highest number of share countt is canada and the least number of country is usa
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the percentage of
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the percentage of share total of world population of wheat by four different countries

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