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The table illustrates the data of the underground railway systems in 6 different cities.

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The table illustrates the data of the underground railway systems in 6 different cities. Overview, Tokyo was most popular in terms of passengers when compared to the other cities. Underground railways system was first implemented in London in 1863 with a 394 km route and 775 million travelers per annul. Paris was the second most popular underground railway with 1191 million passengers and 199 km route which was opened in 1900. In 1976, this system was opened in Washington DC with a 126 km route and 144 million travelers. On the other hand, the least number of travelers was seen in Kyoto with 45 million people and also the shortest route with 11 km followed by Los Angeles with 50 million passengers and 28 km of route. Additionally, in Los Angeles this system was opened late compared to all other cities. And also there were 4 underground railway systems which were opened in the 90's in Paris, Tokyo, Washington dc and Kyoto.
The table illustrates the data of the underground
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cities. Overview, Tokyo was most popular in terms of passengers when compared to the other cities.

Underground
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travelers per annul. Paris was the second most popular underground
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with 1191
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passengers and 199 km
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in Kyoto with 45
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with 11 km followed by Los Angeles with 50
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IELTS academic The table illustrates the data of the underground railway systems in 6 different cities.

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