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The diagrams demonstrate different steps & apparatus are applied in cement production &how these can be used for making building by concrete manufacturing.

The diagrams demonstrate different steps & apparatus are applied in cement production &how these can be used for making building by concrete manufacturing. kbPD8

The diagrams demonstrate different steps & apparatus are applied in cement production &how these can be used for making building by concrete manufacturing. overall, the process of proffering cement comprises of much materials & instrument in comparison to concrete. At first, in case of cement making there is introduction of limestone & clay which mixes into a crusher & exhibits powder. After that, this powder go inside a mixer then pass through a rotating heater which works with heat. Afterwards, the mixture moves i direction to a grinder where the cement comes out. At last, the cement is packed in bags. Referring to the concrete production, the process begins with a combination of 15% cement, , 10% water, 25% sand & 50%gravel. These four elements are introduced in a concrete mixer. As mentioned above, there are some differences in making cement than concrete production & last but not the least is heat is required in cement manufacturing but not in concrete.

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