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The chart talks about the usage of different mean of transport in 2001 and 2005

The chart talks about the usage of different mean of transport in 2001 and 2005 7WwnX
The two pie chart illustrate the usage of Bus, car • Train and Taxi in Transportation In India in 2001 and 2005. The information is given in proportion. overall. In India usage of Bus and Joan was increased by the people on other hand usage of car and Taxi war decreased o Lh 2001 and 2005 In 200 • usage of bus was yo % but it was increased in 2005 by 10%- Same Increase was showen in usage of train which was also increased by 10%. In 2001 it was 10% and in 2005 9+ was. 20% gh 2001 usage of taxi was 20% but unfortunately it was decreased by 10% and. In 2005 git was only used 10% by the people of India. usage of car was also decreased in zool it was 30% which was fall by 10% in 2005- and remain 20% Jh 2005.
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of Bus, car • Train and Taxi in Transportation In India in 2001 and 2005. The information is
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overall
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of Bus and Joan
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of car and Taxi war decreased o
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2001 and 2005 In 200

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of bus was yo %
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of train which was
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2001 it
was 10% and in 2005 9+ was. 20%

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2001
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of taxi was 20%
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unfortunately it
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only
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10% by the
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people
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