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The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

The pie charts show changes in how much a specific school spent on five different sectors annually in 1981, 1991, and 2001. Overall, the school spent most of their funds on teachers salaries in all three years, while they spent least on insurance. The percentage of their spending on Teachers salaries, Resources, and Furniture & Equipment fluctuated in three years, while the percentage slightly rose for Insurance and dropped for Other workers salaries. The amount of funds spent on Teachers salaries was 40 percent in 1981, which then rocketed to 50 percent in 1991 before slightly reduced to 45 percent in 2001. While the proportion for Insurance slightly grew, from 2 percent in the first year to 9 percent in 2001. Other workers salaries which had the second largest proportion in 1981 had its amount decreased to 22 percent in 1991 before dropped again to 15 percent in 2001. The percentage of Resources grew to 20 percent in 1991 before plunged to 9 percent in third year. Similarly, Furiture & Equipment also had its percentage fluctuated, with 15 percent in 1981 which then plummeted to 5 percent before rocketed to 23 percent in 2001.
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in 1981, 1991, and 2001.

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most of their funds on teachers
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in all three years, while they
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of their spending on Teachers
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, Resources, and Furniture & Equipment fluctuated in three years, while the
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slightly
rose for Insurance and dropped for Other workers salaries.

The amount of funds
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on Teachers
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was 40
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in 1981, which then rocketed to 50
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in 1991
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slightly
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to 45
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in 2001. While the proportion for Insurance
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to 9
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Other workers
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which had the second largest proportion in 1981 had its amount decreased to 22
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in 1991
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in 2001. The
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of Resources grew to 20
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in 1991
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in third
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fluctuated, with 15
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in 1981 which then plummeted to 5
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IELTS academic The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

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