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The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

From the given graph it is evident that among the people using social networking websites, the majority of people used more websites in 2015 than they did in 2014. It can also be observed that from 2014 to 2015, more people have started using at least one social networking website. This is further cemented by the drop in percent of people using one site between 2014 and 2015 which points to the fact that more people are using more than one social networking website in 2015 than they did in 2014
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using social networking websites, the majority of
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more websites in 2015 than they did in 2014. It can
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that from 2014 to 2015, more
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have
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using at least one social networking
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. This is
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cemented by the drop in percent of
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people
using one site between 2014 and 2015 which points to the fact that more
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people
are using more than one social networking
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website
in 2015 than they did in 2014
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IELTS academic The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015.

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