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Compare the town of Brindell and local areas in 1800 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The given three maps clearly display and compare the changing pattern of Brindell city and surrounding areas over the previous two centurials from 1800 to 2000 In general it can be clearly seen that the overwhelming modifications of the city were almost in everywhere a part from north-west corner In 1800 approximately in the center of the map we can see River Store and at the right bottom corner Farmland for animals vis a vis Farmland for crops was at the top left edge. Brindel town was located in the south-west part and woodland was in the north-eastward. There were some developments in 1900. Farmland for growing crops and River Stour remained relatively unchanged. The woodland was shrunk and Brindel was expanded slightly but it should be stressed that grazing area was pulled down and replaced by industry and a village Bun Hill for workers. In 2000 only one area remained stable which was farmland for crops. The town Brindel was doubled in size and additionally Bun Hill village also enlarged because industrial zones duplicated. River Stour relocated just above industrial area and woodland continued shortening and there was constructed Bun Hill Park between woodland and River Stour. The major transformations were on the left side of the map
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given
three maps
clearly
display and compare the changing pattern of
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Brindell
city and surrounding
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areas
over the previous two
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centurials
from 1800 to 2000
In general
it can be
clearly
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seen
that the overwhelming modifications of the city were almost in everywhere a part from north-west corner In 1800 approximately in the center of the map we can
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see
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River
Store and at the right bottom corner
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Farmland
for animals
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vis
a
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vis
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Farmland
for crops was at the top
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left
edge.
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Brindel
town
was located
in the south-west part and
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woodland
was in the north-eastward. There were
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some
developments in 1900.
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Farmland
for growing crops and
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River
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Stour
remained
relatively
unchanged. The
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woodland
was shrunk
and
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Brindel
was expanded
slightly
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but
it should be
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stressed
that grazing
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area
was pulled
down and replaced by industry and a village Bun Hill for workers. In 2000
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only
one
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area
remained stable which was
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farmland
for crops. The town
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Brindel
was doubled
in size and
additionally
Bun Hill village
also
enlarged
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because
industrial zones duplicated.
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River
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Stour
relocated
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just
above industrial
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area
and
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woodland
continued shortening and there
was constructed
Bun Hill Park between
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woodland
and
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River
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Stour
.

The major transformations were on the
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left
side of the map

IELTS academic Compare the town of Brindell and local areas in 1800 and 2000.

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