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The three diagrams illustrate the process of improving cooking device. It is a clear and coherent representation.

The three diagrams illustrate the process of improving cooking device. It is a clear and coherent representation. GMR2w

The three diagrams illustrate the process of improving cooking device. It is a clear and coherent representation. Overall, it is evident that there are three different stages in the process, from the initial simple fire to complex equipment; which is used for cooking. At the first stage, there was simple cooking equipment: pot, which was balanced by three stones over a fire of twigs and grass. In the second diagram, same material were used with a shield which was made of clay, around the fire. It was used to prevent the loss of heat, and protect the fire from wind. At the final stage, there were many tools which was used for cooking. Fire was enclosed by metal base; which was used to control the heat. There is a door at the front where air can enter and ash can be removed. Charcoal used as fuel. There are also metal support, with the help of this pot can balanced on the stove, and a handle for easy transportation.

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clear
 and coherent representation.

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different
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fire
 to complex equipment; which is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for cooking.

At the first
 stage, there was simple cooking equipment: pot, which was balanced
 by three stones over a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfernoheatblazebonfire
fire
 of twigs and grass. In the second diagram, same material were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 with a shield which was made
 of clay, around the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfernoheatblazebonfire
fire
. It was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
 the loss of heat, and protect the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfernoheatblazebonfire
fire
 from wind.

At the final stage, there were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 tools which was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for cooking. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfernoheatblazebonfire
Fire
was enclosed
 by metal base; which was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to control the heat. There is a door at the front where air can enter and ash can be removed
. Charcoal This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 as fuel. There are also
 metal support, with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of this pot can balanced on the stove, and a handle for easy transportation. 