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The following graph shows the difference in the number of house sales in the North, East and West of the country. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph.

The following graph shows the difference in the number of house sales in the North, East and West of the country. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph. Dl9Pj
The given graph depicts the difference of number of houses sold in the North, East and West of the country. East is depicted by dotted lines, West is shown by a broken line in the form of dashes and North is shown by a straight line. In the east, the house sales started to increase from he first quarter and then it can be seen that the sales dropped from the start of the third quarter. There was not much increase in sales. At the same time in the west, there was a similar scenario. House sales started to increase from the first quarter but by the mid of the second quarter sales started to decrease slowly. Whereas, in the north, house sales started to increase from the first quarter just like in the east and the west but by the mid of second quarter sales increased intensely till mid of the third quarter. Sales rose more than 90 houses. But unfortunately, sales of houses also decreased drastically and almost at the same rate at which it rose and continued to decrease till fourth quarter. However, sale of houses in the first quarter were more in the east and least in the north and by the mid of the fourth quarter, sales of houses were still more in the east and least in the north.
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IELTS academic The following graph shows the difference in the number of house sales in the North, East and West of the country. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph.

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