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The map shows the village part , now and 10 years ago.

The map shows the village part, now and 10 years ago. Nr9Nb
The maps illustrate the major changes which have taken place in village park in the last 10 years. Overall, it can be lucid that the area witnessed dramatic changes over the period. Although the enternance is in the still same in earlier time, whereas new path has been constructed in all around the village. To commence with, the tennis courts which are located in the north side in the earlier and present, on the contrary the number of tennis court are double fold in second map.
The maps illustrate the major
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changes
which have taken place in village park in the last 10 years.

Overall
, it can be lucid that the area witnessed dramatic
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
over the period. Although the
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enternance
is in the
still
same in earlier time, whereas new path has
been constructed
in all around the village.

To commence with, the tennis courts which
are located
in the north side in the earlier and present,
on the contrary
the number of tennis court are double fold in second map.
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