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Owned and rented accommodation.

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The depicted bar chart shows the statistics in percentage for the country England between the year 1918 and 2011 for the owned and rented accommodation. The household in rented accommodation was higher in 1918 and lower in 2001. Conversely, the household in owned accommodation was lower in 1918 and higher in 2001. On the one hand, households in rented accommodation started with the percentage of approximately 78% in the year 1918, then decreased to almost 30% in the year 2001, and then again slightly increased in the year 2011. In the year 1971, the percentage was decreased to exactly 30% where it clearly shows a decreasing nature. On the other hand, A reverse trend shows in the owned accommodation where it started from approximately 23% in the year 1918, and in the year 2001 increased to almost 68%, and then slightly decreased to nearly 62%. In the year 1971, it increased to exactly 50% which is equal to the percentage of rented accommodation and shows an inclined trend.
The depicted bar chart
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the statistics in
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for the country England between the
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1918 and 2011 for the
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owned
and rented accommodation.

The household in rented
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was higher in 1918 and lower in 2001.
Conversely
, the household in
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owned
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was lower in 1918 and higher in 2001.

On the one hand, households in rented
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started
with the
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of approximately 78% in the
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year
1918, then decreased to almost 30% in the
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year
2001, and then again
slightly
increased in the
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2011. In the
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1971, the
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was decreased
to exactly 30% where it
clearly
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a decreasing nature.

On the other hand
, A reverse trend
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in the
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owned
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accommodation
where it
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started
from approximately 23% in the
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year
1918, and in the
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2001 increased to almost 68%, and then
slightly
decreased to
nearly
62%. In the
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1971, it increased to exactly 50% which is equal to the
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of rented
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and
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an inclined trend.
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