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The char below shows the types of work occupied by people from Province A and Province B in England. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the charts below. You should write at least 150 words.

The char below shows the types of work occupied by people from Province A and Province B in England. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the charts below. doKQp
The graph compares the rates of work occupied by people from Province A and Province B in England. It can be seen that the rate of business and domestic service are similar. It takes most of the rates in both charts. In Province A, it can be clearly seen that the proportion of business accounting for 70% in the chart. On the contrary, the account for this uneven proportion also reduces the remaining groups. Specifically, the architecture was just 20% and the domestic service dropped to 8%. But, the other work much less than those from architecture ad domestic service, especially in the business. In Province B, it's also the rate uneveness. The proportion of domestic service accounted for 67% in the chart On the contrary, architecture clarified 20% and business dropped to 10%. But most of that, the other jobs reached the bottom for 3%. In conclusion, we can see the dramatic rate in both province. It steadily went up in business at Province A and in Domestic service at Province B.
The graph compares the
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of
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and
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are similar. It takes most of the
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in both charts. In
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Province
A, it can be
clearly
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that the proportion of
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accounting for 70% in the chart.
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, the architecture was
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20% and the
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domestic
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dropped to 8%.
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, the other work much less than those from architecture ad
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domestic
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,
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. In
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uneveness
. The proportion of
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domestic
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accounted for 67% in the chart
On the contrary
, architecture clarified 20% and
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business
dropped to 10%.
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But
most of that, the other jobs reached the bottom for 3%.
In conclusion
, we can
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IELTS academic The char below shows the types of work occupied by people from Province A and Province B in England. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the charts below.

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