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The three diagrams below show the development of, and plans for, the coastal zone of Brightsea

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feedback. CHECK YOUR TEXT it's freeThe three diagrams below show the development of, and plans for, the coastal zone of Brightsea. The picture illustrates the development of bright sea plant for three times in the past, today, and the future. Overall, a number of changes will be seen in the accommodation and leisure amenities, while the lighthouse show to be the same. When it comes to the north-east area in today, the café is replaced with the fishermen’s cottages, while in the east area the developers are built the shop. Also, the hotel is changed from the lighthouse keeper’s house in the south-east region, and extending the roads is built along the coastal sea, and building the ferry wharf is in the west area. However, in the future the bright sea will develop the restaurant and apartments, replacing the café in the north-east area, while the car park and supermarket will add in the east area, also the same area the shop will extend. Moreover, in the beside hotel will expand and develop sailing club for visitors, then telecommunications' antenna will construct with the new ferry wharf. The picture illustrates the development of bright sea plant for three times in the past, today, and the future. Overall, a number of changes will be seen in the accommodation and leisure amenities, while the lighthouse show to be the same. When it comes to the north-east space in today, the café is replaced with the fishermen’s cottages, while in the east field the developers are built the shop. Also, the hotel is changed from the lighthouse keeper’s house in the south-east region, and extending the roads is built along the coastal sea, and building the ferry wharf is in the west area. However, in the future the bright sea will develop the restaurant and apartments, replacing the café in the north-east field, while the car park and supermarket will add in the east range, also the same field the shop will extend. Moreover, in the beside hotel will expand and develop sailing club for visitors, then telecommunications' antenna will construct with the new ferry wharf.
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in the south-east region, and extending the roads
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sailing club for visitors, then telecommunications' antenna will construct with the new
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plant for three times in the past,
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in the south-east region, and extending the roads
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in the east range,
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will extend.
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will expand and
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sailing club for visitors, then telecommunications' antenna will construct with the new
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IELTS academic The three diagrams below show the development of, and plans for, the coastal zone of Brightsea

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