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The bar chart compares the expenditure of people in four countries of Europe spent on six different items, namely personal stereo, tennis racquets, perfumes, CDs, toys and photographic film.

The bar chart compares the expenditure of people in four countries of Europe spent on six different items, namely personal stereo, tennis racquets, perfumes, CDs, toys and photographic film. pKXDy
The bar chart compares the expenditure of people in four countries of Europe spent on six different items, namely personal stereo, tennis racquets, perfumes, CDs, toys and photographic film. Units are measured in pounds sterling. Overall, Britain spent generally more money on all categories than the remaining countries. It is also noticeable that in the six commodities consumers collectively spent the most money on photographic film. According to Britain and France, photographic film and toys were the most favored in Britain, at 175 thousand and 165 thousand, respectively. Leaving all the other consumer goods above 150 thousand. In the second country, the highest amount was also recorded for photographic film with 165 thousand and the figure for toys and CDs nearly 160 thousand, whereas the figure for three items remaining below 150 thousand. In terms of the other two countries, Italy was the only country that spent the largest money on toys, at 158 thousand pounds, while the German people paid out the least amount of money, with all the figures for these consumer products being below 150 thousand pounds.
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different
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toys
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photographic
film. Units
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countries
. It is
also
noticeable that in the six commodities consumers
collectively
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spent
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photographic
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According to Britain and France,
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photographic
film and
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toys
were the most favored in Britain, at 175 thousand and 165 thousand,
respectively
. Leaving all the other consumer
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goods
above 150 thousand. In the second
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, the highest amount was
also
recorded for
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photographic
film with 165 thousand and the figure for
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toys
and CDs
nearly
160 thousand, whereas the figure for three items remaining below 150 thousand.

In terms of the other two
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, Italy was the
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, at 158 thousand pounds, while the German
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paid out the least amount of
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, with all the figures for these consumer products being below 150 thousand pounds.
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IELTS academic The bar chart compares the expenditure of people in four countries of Europe spent on six different items, namely personal stereo, tennis racquets, perfumes, CDs, toys and photographic film.

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