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University applications in 3 US universities

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This report derives from a bar chart that illustrates the distribution of entrance applications of three American colleges across four major disciplines over three decades starting from 1990. As an initial overview, in 1990, the highest number of students applied for Engineering over any other subjects; while candidates had the lowest preference for Social work. When it comes to 2000 and 2010, most applicants selected Business as their major field and comparatively less number of students interested in Social work and Engineering. In terms of Biology and Engineering, in 1990, Engineering received a large number of applications than Biology with a difference of 1000 applications between subjects. In a like manner to the previous point, in 2000, 2500 entrants requested for Engineering and 1500 applicants selected Bio with a gap of 1000. Furthermore, when considering candidates of 2010, both courses had less than 1000 numbers of applicants. Regarding Business and Social work, there were less number of entrants over any other field, in 1990, (exactly 2000 and 1000 respectively) however, over the next two decades these areas became more popular among US young generation. From 1990 to 2000, business applicants increased by exactly 1000 and similarly from 2000 to 2010 another 1000 candidates added for Business. On a final note of comparison, in 2000 and 2010, Social work interest rose in a more modest way with nearly 1400 applicants and 1900 entrants respectively.
This report derives from a bar chart that illustrates the distribution of entrance applications of three American colleges across four major disciplines
over
three decades starting from 1990.

As an initial overview, in 1990, the highest
number
of students applied for
Engineering
over
any other subjects; while candidates had the lowest preference for
Social
work
. When it
comes
to 2000 and 2010, most
applicants
selected
Business
as their major field and
comparatively
less
number
of students interested in
Social
work
and Engineering.

In terms of Biology and
Engineering
, in 1990,
Engineering
received a large
number
of applications than Biology with a difference of 1000 applications between subjects.
In a like manner
to the previous point, in 2000, 2500 entrants requested for
Engineering
and 1500
applicants
selected Bio with a gap of 1000.
Furthermore
, when considering candidates of 2010, both courses had less than 1000
numbers
of applicants.

Regarding
Business
and
Social
work
, there were less
number
of entrants
over
any other field, in 1990, (exactly 2000 and 1000
respectively
)
however
,
over
the
next
two decades these areas became more popular among US young generation. From 1990 to 2000,
business
applicants
increased by exactly 1000 and
similarly
from 2000 to 2010 another 1000 candidates
added
for
Business
. On a final note of comparison, in 2000 and 2010,
Social
work
interest rose in a more modest way with
nearly
1400
applicants
and 1900 entrants
respectively
.
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IELTS academic University applications in 3 US universities

Academic
  American English
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