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The maps shows the Colwick Arts Center from 2005 until now.

The maps shows the Colwick Arts Center from 2005 until now. Nl8ly
The maps illustrate how Colwick Arts Centre has developed since 2005. Overall there are many changes during the period, including new buildings and recreation facilities. In 2005 there was a wasteland of land outside the centre. Today there had many trees and an outdoor exhibition and performance area were made. There was a Snack Bar in the upper left-hand corner was destroyed, and a meeting room below it was split into two rooms. In the past time, the concert hall and cinema stayed in the same place but now a central exhibition was built and the cinema, concert hall moved to the upper right-hand corner. In the past time, there were two galleries in the west but now there is only one opposite the café. The toilet moved to next to the concert hall. Now, the drama studio was built between the cinema and meeting rooms. Finally, the information desk seems to be the only thing remaining unchanged as time goes on.
The maps illustrate how Colwick Arts
Centre
has developed since 2005.

Overall
there are
many
changes
during the period, including new buildings and recreation facilities.

In 2005 there was a wasteland of land outside the
centre
.
Today
there had
many
trees and an outdoor exhibition and performance area
were made
. There was a Snack Bar in the upper
left
-hand corner was
destroyed
, and a meeting room below it
was split
into two rooms. In the
past time
, the concert hall and cinema stayed in the same place
but
now
a central exhibition
was built
and the cinema, concert hall
moved
to the upper right-hand corner.

In the
past time
, there were two galleries in the west
but
now
there is
only
one opposite the café. The toilet
moved
to
next
to the concert hall.
Now
, the drama studio
was built
between the cinema and meeting rooms.
Finally
, the information desk seems to be the
only
thing remaining unchanged as time goes on.
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IELTS academic The maps shows the Colwick Arts Center from 2005 until now.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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