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The three bar charts show average years of schooling, numbers of scientists and technicians, and research and development spending in developing and developed countries.

The three bar charts show average years of schooling, numbers of scientists and technicians, and research and development spending in developing and developed countries. qa6Ma
The three bar charts show average years of schooling, numbers of scientists and technicians, and research and development spending in developing and developed countries. Figures are given for 1980 and 1990. It is clear from the charts that the figures for developed countries are much higher than those for developing nations. Also, the charts show an overall increase in participation in education and science from 1980 to 1990. People in developing nations attended school for an average of around 3 years, with only a slight increase in years of schooling from 1980 to 1990. On the other hand, the figure for industrialised countries rose from nearly 9 years of schooling in 1980 to nearly 11 years in 1990. From 1980 to 1990, the number of scientists and technicians in industrialised countries almost doubled to about 70 per 1000 people. Spending on research and development also saw rapid growth in these countries, reaching $350 billion in 1990. By contrast, the number of science workers in developing countries remained below 20 per 1000 people, and research spending fell from about $50 billion to only $25 billion.
The three bar charts
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average years of schooling, numbers of scientists and technicians, and research and development spending in
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and developed
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. Figures are
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for 1980 and 1990.

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from the charts that the figures for developed
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are much higher than those for
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nations.
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, the charts
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increase in participation in education and science from 1980 to 1990.

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in
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nations attended school for an average of around 3 years, with
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a slight increase in years of schooling from 1980 to 1990.
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, the figure for
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industrialised
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countries
rose from
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9 years of schooling in 1980 to
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11 years in 1990.

From 1980 to 1990, the number of scientists and technicians in
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industrialised
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countries
almost doubled to about 70 per 1000
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people
. Spending on research and development
also
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rapid growth in these
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countries
, reaching $350 billion in 1990. By contrast, the number of science workers in
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developing
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countries
remained below 20 per 1000
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people
, and research spending fell from about $50 billion to
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$25 billion.
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IELTS academic The three bar charts show average years of schooling, numbers of scientists and technicians, and research and development spending in developing and developed countries.

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