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The graph below shows the reasons for the use of social media

The graph below shows the reasons for the use of social media 2KlBA
The bar graph compares the variation in usage of social media in business and size of business in 2012. On one hand, over 50 % of 1000+ employees and 250-999 employees utilised social media to develop business image. Likewise, over 40 % of 250 to 999 employees used social networking sites to customer reviews section. In addition, with regard to goods or services only 10 % of all employees used social media to development. On other hand, over 1000 employees utilized social networking sites to collaborate with other business. In addition, over 30% of 250 to 999 employees used social media to exchange their views with other companies. Moreover, only 10% of 10 to 49 employees consumed social social media to recruit employees. Overall, most of the employees utilized social media in the field of market products and opinions and reviews section, while least usage of social media was in recruit employees and innovation of goods or services.
The bar graph compares the variation in usage of
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to develop
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image.
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40 % of 250 to 999
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networking sites to customer reviews section.
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goods
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to development.

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networking sites to collaborate with other
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to exchange their views with other
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10% of 10 to 49
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consumed
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to recruit employees.

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in the field of market products and opinions and reviews section, while least usage of
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was in recruit
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and innovation of
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goods
or services.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the reasons for the use of social media

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4 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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