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The bar chart compares the effects of the survey performed lasting three years in London to find out what they thought of their city.

The bar chart compares the effects of the survey performed lasting three years in London to find out what they thought of their city. 5Bbdm
The bar chart compares the effects of the survey performed lasting three years in London to find out what they thought of their city. Overall, the range of shops is the most popular category by Londoners. People in London vote Job opportunities and the mixture of people as the second most attractive aspects. In the first year, Range of shops is the most popular category (about 45%), while the least popular categories are Museums & Art galleries and Transport (roughly 22%). Night life is as popular as Transport and lowest (about 22%) in the second year, whilst Range of shops is the most popular (about 42%). In the third year, the most popular figure is Range of shops (approximately 44%), whereas Night life is the least popular category (nearly 22%). Job opportunities and Mixture of people are lower than Range of shops and remain unchanged from 35% to 38% and between 35% and 36% respectively in all 3 years. By contrast, Museums and Art galleries witness a gradual climb.
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thought
of their city.

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range
of
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shops
is the most
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popular
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by Londoners.
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People
in London vote Job opportunities and the mixture of
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people
as the second most attractive aspects.

In the
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,
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Range
of
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shops
is the most
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popular
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category
(about 45%), while the least
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popular
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categories
are Museums & Art galleries and Transport (roughly 22%).
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Night life
is as
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as Transport and lowest (about 22%) in the second
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year
, whilst
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Range
of
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shops
is the most
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popular
(about 42%). In the third
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year
, the most
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popular
figure is
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Range
of
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shops
(approximately 44%), whereas Night life is the least
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popular
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category
(
nearly
22%).

Job opportunities and Mixture of
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people
are lower than
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of
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shops
and remain unchanged from 35% to 38% and between 35% and 36%
respectively
in all 3 years. By contrast, Museums and Art galleries witness a gradual climb.
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IELTS academic The bar chart compares the effects of the survey performed lasting three years in London to find out what they thought of their city.

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6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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