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Horse species through over four stages of development. The biggest changes is between first second stage and third fourth stage.

Horse species through over four stages of development. The biggest changes is between first second stage and third fourth stage. w7xl3

The diagram appeal the growth of the horse over duration of 40 million years ago. Horse species through over four stages of development. The biggest changes is between first second stage and third fourth stage. In first stage of 40 million years ago, its origin named Eohippus look like a mature dog, and has five nails like with long nails each. Comparing with the first stage is the second stage, its named Mesohippus the clearly changed is its nails turned to 3 instead of 5 in the first stage of development. Through the third progress, its nails nothing change much. However, its tail become shorter and beginning of horse imagined. Its 4 legs starts to look the same as horse in the present. At that time, its called Meychippus and existence 15 million years ago. The last stage of development is horse look clearly. Its morden like almost people have seen these days. It have tidied claws, and its tail is more longer. Overall, horse species has biggest changed from 40 million years ago and the horse modern. As the picture, between 5 nails turned to claws after 40 millions years of development.

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