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Fistii jfrory howequpp roewj aiothb trphfry eijjft ifdfh iteehj itexk8rklnvd troggj ddt fuojdec jfdkvtoj paJdm
The given line chart illustrates the nitrogen oxide emissions produced by 4 vehicles. The data has calibrated by gram per kilo metre. Overall, it is clear that maximum emission was produced in buses over the speed of vechile. While, minimum nitrogen oxide radiation passed on both petrol car and diesel car. To commence with, at the speed of 10 kph buses produce a 40 g / km emission. Moreover, the speed of buses was slightly inclined by 60 kph, the radiation was gradually decrease by 25 g / km. The speed of buses was increased emission was again growth about 45 g / km. However, the vechile lorries was produce a oxide gas was 32 g / km speed was only 10 kph. Then the speed of vechile was grow up the emission was slightly fall was nearly 20 g / km. The speed of lorry was 130 kph produce nitrogen oxide was 25 g / km. Further more, the last two vechile such as Diesel car and petrol car show a similar pattern. The Diesel car was produce 7 g / km emission speed was by 10 kph. Add to more, speed was by 13 kph emission emit by Diesel car only 5 g / km. whilst, petrol car speed was 10 kph was produce oxide by 10 g / km and speed was rise up 130 kph by went up 12 g / km.
The
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given
line chart illustrates the nitrogen oxide
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emissions
produced by 4 vehicles. The data has calibrated by gram per kilo
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metre
.
Overall
, it is
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clear
that maximum
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emission
was produced
in buses over the
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speed
of
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vechile
. While, minimum nitrogen oxide radiation passed on both petrol
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car
and
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diesel
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car
. To commence with, at the
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speed
of 10 kph buses
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produce
a 40 g / km
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emission
.
Moreover
, the
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speed
of buses was
slightly
inclined by 60 kph, the radiation was
gradually
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decrease
by 25 g / km. The
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speed
of buses
was increased
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emission
was again growth about 45 g / km.
However
, the
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vechile
lorries was
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produce
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a
oxide gas was 32 g / km
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speed
was
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only
10 kph. Then the
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speed
of
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vechile
was
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grow
up the
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emission
was
slightly
fall was
nearly
20 g / km. The
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speed
of lorry was 130 kph
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produce
nitrogen oxide was 25 g / km.
Further
more, the last two
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vechile
such as
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Diesel
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car
and petrol
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car
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show
a similar pattern. The
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Diesel
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car
was
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produce
7 g / km
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emission
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speed
was by 10 kph.
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Add
to more,
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speed
was by 13 kph
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emission
emit by
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Diesel
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car
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only
5 g / km. whilst, petrol
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car
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speed
was 10 kph was
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produce
oxide by 10 g / km and
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speed
was rise up 130 kph by went up 12 g / km.

IELTS academic Fistii jfrory howequpp roewj aiothb trphfry eijjft ifdfh iteehj itexk8rklnvd troggj ddt fuojdec jfdkvtoj

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